O Forlorn "

Your life is a solo war
Nobody can see or hear
Your overwhelming smile
Nor your overpowering tears

It's only you
You have to mend yourself
Nobody cares
Its the forlorn truth



  1. Very pretty poem. Poetry is so beautiful. I am envious because I enjoy reading it but not brave enough to write it. Stopping by from the A to Z challenge.

  2. Oh, that's a sad poem, but it's beautiful, too. Thanks for sharing. Stopping by from A to Z.

  3. A forlorn poem. ;) Great job.

    ~Patricia Lynne aka Patricia Josephine~
    Member of C. Lee's Muffin Commando Squad
    Story Dam
    Patricia Lynne, Indie Author

  4. So beautiful. This poem really speaks to my heart. Thank you for making beautiful the feelings that I've been struggling with lately. It helps me feel more joy, knowing that I am not alone in feeling alone (if that makes sense, lol).

  5. Sad but I like the word you chose. Very expressive.


  6. So eloquent. So true.


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