You’ll never know - (Blog-a-ton 6)
This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 6; the sixth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
The trek was fun. Even tough five out of nine turned up, the whole trip got more enjoyable with the smaller group. It was already 8 pm. I phoned home as I boarded the train to Mumbai. The most I hate is travelling alone. Since it was dark outside, even watching the passing scenery outside was out of option. So my eyes wandered in the train, trying to pick up anything interesting. Trains & passengers can be very entertaining, my experience says.
I didn’t had to go far. The conversation next to me caught my interest. Two guys were talking in low voice.
“You know, yesterday I met her. She came to return my books. I wanted to say it to her right away, but I was nervous”
“You are dumbass, see, if you don’t tell her this week, don’t ever talk to me about this. I am sick of your hypothesis. Are you going to do it ?” he made a face as he said it.
“Hey, understand ya. You know how she is. Sometimes I feel that I say it, when I’ll tell her that I like her, she might punch me in my face”
“You are afraid of her. Ha!”
“I think I have only one chance. If I miss it she’s never going to turn her face to me” The train came to a stop, they peeped out of the window and hurried to get down. As they moved, a folded paper fell from the guy’s book. I picked it. Being an express train, most of the people were asleep, I unfolded it.
Hi Rahul,
We don’t know each other much. But the truth is that I like you. I don’t know if you feel the same. If so then meet me tomorrow at the Rastek cliff. If you don’t turn up, I’ll get my answer.
Sheetal.
I looked up, almost jumped. But they were gone. He’s not going to meet Sheetal. But what will happen next. Will she talk to him about the letter ever ? Will they come together ? I’ll never know…
P.S : The story is piece of fiction based on the prompt pic.
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gr8 post! I see a nominee in you! You know I never considered taking part in this BAT coz mala kahi suchatch nahiye!
ReplyDeleteAnd after reading this I was like "He mala ka nahi suchla"
Now I'll scratch my brain for 3.85 minutes and if I come up with something I'll post it!
Thanks. Waiting for yours. Actually aaj kiti divsani mi blogging/commenting kartey...kaamane hairan kelay...waiting for your post...mala mahit ahe tuza pakka chan asel :)
ReplyDeleteGood one. Open-ended ending :-)
ReplyDeleteFirst time here. Loved the photos on your photo blog !
Thanks Madhu :) Keep visiting!
ReplyDeleteA very nice ending, I love the look of your blog, Khub chan .....Mana pan kamane hairan kela ahe...
ReplyDeletethe ending really made me wonder what would happen next... wonderfully written
ReplyDelete@Shahid & Rajlakshmi
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading. Keep visiting :)
oh shit... why the cliff in particular...:O
ReplyDeletenice blog here..good one...:D
ReplyDeletetee udi marnar nai na?
ReplyDeleteNice story. I like open ended stories more.
ReplyDeleteNice story. Good idea, leaving it open ended.
ReplyDelete@SiD
ReplyDeletehaha...te majhya manat pan nahi ala :D tu ekdum hatke vichar kelas ;)
& Thanks :)
@Aativas & Dreamer
Thanks :)
A very lovely interpretation of the picture!! And the intrigue at the end ... liked it!!
ReplyDeleteCheers :)
Thanks Shilpa :)
ReplyDeletevery good one :)
ReplyDeleteliked it :)
Hey Megha, that was a nice ending. I like stories with an open end. That way the story lingers on the mind even after reading it. Works well for short stories.
ReplyDeleteLiked it very much. Keep writing.
All the best!
Cheerios!
Thanks Sorcy :)
ReplyDelete@Karthik
Thanks :) Keep visiting!
I love that you left it open ended! :)
ReplyDeleteHey I liked it. I really wanna know what happened after you got the letter. (I know its fiction, still i wanna know) :P
ReplyDeleteNice post. :)
Nice..would like to read 'part 2' of this story.... :))
ReplyDelete@Mia
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
@Pushpee & Nethra
Thanks..I wasn't thinking of the 2nd part...You want it? I'll have to start thinking...
would luv to see wot happens next
ReplyDeleteHello! New here :) Gotta thank Sid for mentioning your post on FB and that is how I ended up here :) Nice one and as for the open ending, I'd appreciate if you can close it with a sequel :) It'd be nice to know how it further proceeds and concludes :) Good luck with BATOM 6!
ReplyDeletevery sweet
ReplyDeleteGood one :D
ReplyDeletePoor girl, couldn't she send a mail or an SMS? She ought to be counselled on the uses of technology.
Btw, the starting has a few grammatical errors, please do look into that!
Cheers :)
Wow! Even like nethra I wanna know what happened next! Its was beautiful re :)
ReplyDeleteSorry to disappoint you, but I din participate this time...
ReplyDeleteHappy to appoint you... I'm voting for you!
Very sweet story but I would like to read the end of it! I thought like Sid at first....pan tine udi marayache chances kami vatatat...She was a brave girl to express her feelings atleast in the note...so she will not jump...Is she the same girl they were talking about?! You will keep me wondering for ever!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant attempt! I liked the plot althought it was too short! You could have added a few more emotions into the climax. Nevertheless, the fact that you made it short and sweet intrigued me! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteNot fair yar.......
ReplyDeleteisn't it cruel?
:)
lollzzz. Good One.
@Dido & Shruti
ReplyDeleteHmm...thinking of posting the sequel. Thanks for reading and appreciating :)
@Raksha Raman
Thanks :)Glad that you liked it. Will post the sequel soon
@Just Another
Thanks
@Saurabh
Thanks ya :)
@Pawan
Thanks. Sorry couldnt identify any. I am bad at the language. Can you help me out ?
@Pra
haha...people have suicidal thinking..pretty destructive ;)
mi tasa vicharach nahi kela...ekach goshtila kiti vegla vegla valan yevu shakto
@Neeraj
Thanks ya.
@Makk
:) Life is cruel...
Yup. Write part two. :)
ReplyDelete@Nethra
ReplyDeleteYups...thought of something..but don't know will it do justice to the original...but will try
nice story...:)
ReplyDeleteI dont think so.
ReplyDeleteLife is Beautiful!
wow...that was very simple yet said a lot...very well written.
ReplyDeleteI liked your blog title...
I liked this very much!
ReplyDeleteThe flow of thought and an open-ending. It made me want to read more. I was honestly looking for a concluding part! :)
Good luck for BATOM6! :)
btw, love ur blog template!
ReplyDeleteThe "never-knows" in our life are some of the painful moments. and when you think of this pain, it reminds of this "Sometimes it s harder to deprive one self of a pain than pleasure"
ReplyDeleteso the never-knows are a lot of pain- agreed. But we realize and appreciate it only after it is known. not until it remains never-known
small and cute story with a happy ending......gud one
ReplyDelete@Geeta
ReplyDeleteThanks!
@Makk
Right...it's a mix of both :)
Kabhi khushi kabhi gam..tara rum pam pam ;)
@Dilontherocks
Thanks :)
@gkam
Thanks. Will write the concludding very soon
@Tuppence
Ya, there are always option and non taken will always make us wonder..the road less travelled
@Mahesh
Thanks :)
Very Nice interpretation! After reading your story, laga part lena chahiye tha!! :)
ReplyDeleteThere was so much to derive out of that picture, NOTHING occured to me!
Hey it was a shoorrrt story but beautifully written and expressed. I liked the title too!!
ReplyDelete:~)
Hey Megha, very nice story, good work !
ReplyDelete@Preeti
ReplyDeleteHey, working with the next part..
Thanks for reading and appreciating.
Keep visiting :)
@Yemiledu & MR
Thanks :) Keep visiting