Wednesday, January 27, 2010

A return gift : 55 fiction

“Happy Birthday! A gift for you” she said, blindfolding him.

“You are my gift darling” he replied smiling, happy in the anticipation of gift.

“It’s nothing compared to what you’ve given me darling”

“Happy Birthday Sweetheart”

He did away the blindfold. Her girlfriend was standing arms folded & next to her was his wife, infuriated.


P.S This is my first attempt to 55 fiction. I see that writing short has a different challenge coz if the plot is not clear everything goes for a toss. Hope it didn’t happened here. Let me know how you find it, tough I know that this is not a smart one but I pardon myself as it’s just the first time & I am going to try to write more & better.


  1. Haha!

    Tiger Woods.

    This one is wonderful! I wouldn't be able to write this well, so hats off to you!

  2. too good...too good...:D


    U should write one for me too... send me a mail pls...if interested.

  3. Good work...for the first few lines i was disappointed but then...wowhooo

  4. First attempt was really good!
    keep it up!

    mast majja ali!

  5. Thank you all :)
    I am gonna try my hands on this more...

    Will send u a mail soon, *started thinking for some idea

  6. Your first atempt but a wonderful one... Had me smiling :) Cheers ...


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