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Sometimes I glide down the hills..

Sometimes I balance on the plane wings..

Sometimes I am at heights…

Sometimes walking alone in dark nights..

           Sometimes they make you oversleep..

           While Sometimes they run you out of sleep..

How gloomy, enigmatic they are!

Some fresh, some repetition they are!

           Dreams! What do they tell us ?

           Is there a message for us ?

           Or just a fantasy to hook us !

Whatever is it ?

A game of our brain, Or the fear of our mind ?

Oh this quest! My mind undergoes the grill..

With no answers, I think, I should just enjoy the thrill!

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  1. Linda JacobsJuly 8, 2009 at 11:59 PM

    Beautifully said!

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  2. Sherri B.July 9, 2009 at 2:31 AM

    Very cleverly written! You described the mystery and confusion of dreams perfectly.

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  3. Stan SkiJuly 9, 2009 at 7:46 AM

    Dreams always leave us asking questions.

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  4. SumitJuly 9, 2009 at 10:38 AM

    That was really nicely written, Megha. :)

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  5. Tumblewords:July 9, 2009 at 10:44 AM

    Fascinating! Provocative piece...

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  6. andyJuly 9, 2009 at 4:40 PM

    Love the thrill/grill rhyme!

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  7. Americanising DesiJuly 9, 2009 at 8:44 PM

    you are superb... totally great with rhyming and the messgae:)

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  8. AnonymousJuly 10, 2009 at 6:46 AM

    hey this is good :-)
    your most rhyming poem to date...you're getting better. Keep at it.

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  9. MeghaJuly 10, 2009 at 10:35 AM

    Thanks :)
    Poetry was never my area, but its good to hear that I am improving in this. Guess I should try to do it frequently.

    Thanks for visiting and commenting.

    Keep blogging.

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  10. yogesh kadvekarJuly 10, 2009 at 1:45 PM

    sahi aahe

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  11. lissaJuly 10, 2009 at 8:03 PM

    yes, enjoy the thrill, because there's just no stopping them from entering our minds

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  12. MeghaJuly 10, 2009 at 8:41 PM

    Thanks.

    Lissa, you are right :)

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  13. PJDJuly 11, 2009 at 4:51 AM

    Should be set to music.

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  14. gautami tripathyJuly 11, 2009 at 8:28 AM

    I like such dreams..

    a day in a child's life

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  15. MeghaJuly 11, 2009 at 10:36 AM

    Thanks PJD and Gautami!!

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  16. ani_asetJuly 29, 2009 at 7:32 PM

    you are getting better megha :)

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  17. MeghaJuly 30, 2009 at 10:35 AM

    Thanks ani_aset. Your words are really encouraging :)

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