Reaching the Heaven
As the heat is killing me in Mumbai
I want to slip into the haven
into the pine woods with birds perched on
into the canvas with colors vivid colors spilled on
into the Himalayas
into the Glaciers
into the valleys
into the streams
I want to slip into the haven
into the history of century old temples
into the alluring world of monasteries
into the Rappelling
into the Paragliding
into the Skiing
into the Rafting
I want to slip into the haven
into the heaven on Earth..called Himachal ...
I want to slip into the haven
into the pine woods with birds perched on
into the canvas with colors vivid colors spilled on
into the Himalayas
into the Glaciers
into the valleys
into the streams
I want to slip into the haven
into the history of century old temples
into the alluring world of monasteries
into the Rappelling
into the Paragliding
into the Skiing
into the Rafting
I want to slip into the haven
into the heaven on Earth..called Himachal ...
Written for Three Words Wednesday Prompt : Allure Perch Vivid.
P.S. I would be going for a 8-day trip to Himachal Pradesh. Its the place I have always wanted to go.
Sounds wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThis one is rather interesting. The repetition works well to lull the reader into the peace promised by "the haven".
ReplyDeleteAnd you might be able to sell it to a tourist bureau or travel agency someplace. *grin*
Nicely, this makes me want to slip into the haven too.
ReplyDeletehaven from heat is always welcome and you make it sound devine
ReplyDeleteSounds like a nice place. I wanna go too.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds lovely...I don't blame you a bit for wanting to go there!
ReplyDelete@Megha,
ReplyDeletesounds great. Wish I too could take off :(.
Lovely, lovely!
ReplyDelete@ Thomg
ReplyDeleteYa...I too have heard much about the place..perftect retreat
@ Mendur
haha...thanks for apreciating, to be true, i never thought i could write something close to poetry, it was just a try, Good that you liked it.
@ Sweet Talking Guy
Yea...Get a break...start planning :)
@ Pia
Thanks Pia. Would try more on poems...
@ Angel
hehe...why not...its a great place...
@ Fledgling Poet
Ya, i was longing for a break from the mundane life...
@ Hashir
haha..start planning, there are so many beautiful places in India...
@ Tumblewords
Thanks :) keep visiting...would be posting more on the place after my return
This year, even Bangalore is getting roasted.
ReplyDeleteLucky you :)
@BrownPhantom
ReplyDeleteyea...but Bangalore is still has much better climate...
Hey, is this picture of Hidimba Temple in Manali? Enjoy your trip.
ReplyDeleteHimachal Pradesh is a must visit place, Its like an elixir to a chaotic lifestyle.
ReplyDeletealluring chant rhythm to this poem.
ReplyDeletewow this is so awesome! have fun there!! and great poem. :)
ReplyDeleteme too me too..
ReplyDeleteHave a great trip Megha!!
@Mridula
ReplyDeleteYes, it is..its really good, even the surrounding forest is enchanting :)
@Ashish Sukhadeve
Yes it is..I just loved it...would visit it again definitely
@Mia
Thanks Mia
@Floreta
Thanks. It's a great place, I was sad while returning
@Sudharm baxi
:D Thanks..its really great...